Chapter nine:... and down to the earth and Chapter ten: New Year's Eve
The band is going bad and they haven't succes at the concerts. Pete and Joe drink a lot and go every day in a bar. They shave their hair and become rascists. At a concert they have a fight with other peoples. Dani and Alex have a disagreement.
In chapter ten Dani and Alex move to England. There they have a new band which is named ''The Dolphins''.
At the end they celebrate New Year's Eve.
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hey ho ♥
sorry, but we had to write a 'mini-saga'
and that means, that you have to write exactly 50 words !
and you have a lillte spelling-mistake: 'racist' not 'rascists'
:D
however, i think it's a nice post !
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Anja ♥~
You may be right with the context but I would write it different. I see your point that the band's success decreases and Alex choses to go back to England with Dani, but for a mini saga with 50 words, it's too precise to whrite that Pete and Joe shave their heads & drink a lot, the fight in the club and the arguement between Alex and Dani, whrite short what exactly happend.
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